Feedback from my client + first draft

After shooting and editing the first draft of my music video, I spoke to my client. They gave me several bits of feedback that would help me in improving my music video. The first bit of feedback I received was, improving the lip-syncing in some parts of the song. In some cases the artist sang a split second before the song which made negatively affected the realism and professionalism of the video. Another improvement that I needed to make was the fact that in some shots of the artist lip-syncing, there was too much space around them. Meaning that I would have to crop the shot in order for the main focus to be completely on the artist. The shot had to go from a mid-shot to a close-up, which is much preferred in a shot like the one being talked about. Another adjustment that was suggested by my client was, taking out some of the cutaways and replacing them with other ones. This was due to the original ones not completely fitting in and the fact that there were better quality cutaway shots that I had filmed, and were more suited for the video.