First draft evaluation

I thought that in order to make the first draft of my music video successful, I needed to include; a range of shots, include all four locations, ensure the artist singing and the track was synced accurately, include a range of shots for cutaways and also to include various effects. So far, I think I have done all of these things apart from including visual effects e.g. slow motion etc. I have made sure various amounts of shots are involved throughout the video and the four locations are clearly shown in each frame. When matching up the lip-syncing and the track together, I had to look back at a few shots to edit them. This was because sometimes the artist was a fraction too fast or the track was too far ahead. However, after looking and listening to each one, I corrected them and now look a lot more professional than they previously did. The camera angles I included for each cutaway I think had a variety an each were relating to the shots/location before and after them. I wanted to perhaps include more effects to give the music video a cutting edge to it, and make it look more professional. It will also make it more interesting, giving the viewer some variety in the video. If I had to improve on something it would definitely to be add more effects, and also if I was recording again I would make sure to have more shots of the artist lip syncing to the song.